Dear _______,
Peace Land is a new society, or uptopia that has several diferent purposes and rules. In the U.S today there is a lot of violence, arguments, and bad people where in Peace Land all of those bad things no longer exist. Peace Land is a place where everyone can feel safe with the people their around and the places they live. When arguments occur there is a way to fix them without violence, no one will feel afraid in our Utopia because of our rules/laws/and consequences. The best thing about Peace Land is that no one will ever be alone, some people fear that they will have to spend the rest of their life alone and in Peace Land this is impossible, everyone will have someone. If violence,fear,sadness and arguments are somethings that you like then I'd say Peace Land is not for you, but I don't think that many people wouldn't want to live in Peace.
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Your grammar errors make it a little hard to understand at times, but this is a very well-written, persuasive piece. Notice how much more in depth it is than your Declaration of Independence post. I expect more like this there as well.
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